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Faverate Flash artist Stuill number one

nice one again squeaky Still looking forward to sprit of haloween 2 though Hope you can do that ok i am in a hurry but saw your animation come though in an emailo so must review ok

Graphics, Style both 10 just outsstanding as always
Sound Clear sharp un broken thats a 10
violence its not voilent :P
Interactivity 6 there a lesson to learn
Homor 7 nice unexpected funny ending
Overall 10 for just being great as always

squeakytoad responds:

I'm contemplating releasing Spirit of Halloween 2 in February or just waiting until this Halloween.

Pretty Neat

Overall animation Pretty god

Graphics & Style:
Definity on of the best animations for graphics A nice style you have used the thin lines short and neat making a nice person but the most impressive thing was the amazing hair detail and the Landscape detail. For these both 10

Sounds:
pretty standard what i would have expected from any animation to do well for this 8 Possible Idea Lay within the Sound effect really Maybe Try Detailed Sound like When He runs Calm down the background music have a faint sound of the feet and th heart beat though these are maybe ideas for you to play with.

Violence:
0 its not a violent animation but it does not mean its a bad thing most the best animations are low or no violence

Interactivity:
0 Its not a game and/or contain anything a person can really relate to but goood animation don't need this look at bitey of brakenwood and other great animation.

Homour; Nice idea trying to add the homour in but maybe not your strong point you don't need the homour as a strong base But its nice to see your skill in the animation.

Overall:
Overall a great animation a few areas to improve off to a good start in your flash animation good luck in the future

Very Emo Style Though a good animation

The animation was good Its a good lenght animation.
A Break down:

Graphics 8- The graphics were pretty good though a touching up on the blood is needed you do lose your head a little when using it adding in large quanity but overall a good graphics

Style 8- A Very emo Style which Is rare to see often on newgrounds Not my faverate style but You deverse 8 for the bravery in doing it.

Sound 10: Well you have nailed the sound good song to go with the animation the voices were clear and good and the music faded when they spoke for that a 10.

Violence 6: Not much which is good but violence in the sence of self harming and the bus hitting for that 6.

Interactivy 4: Not To inactive though More inactive to a particular group of people adding in real life situation you get 4.

Humor 0: What can i say its not a funny topic really but you can never get everything in one animation.

Overall 9: For a Well done animation Tone the blod down a little and make it more realistic and the mouths could be something else to work but overall a pretty good animation.

Filmpiegang responds:

Thanks alot for this review, it was really useful! Nice to see that some people actually watch this all the way through.
I wasn't really going for 'emo' since that's not my thing. I just thought this style fitted the storyline best :)

SqueakyToad does it again

Another Great animation from my faverate flash artist keep up the great work and also will there be a spirit of haloween 2????
Just wondering as we left the last one at the cav and it was very good. But anyway back to this animation. I like the idea of the incorperating our other work in i must say very stylish and how do you get such fluent speech on the flash well see you and can't wait for the next animation

squeakytoad responds:

Yup. Spirit of Halloween 2 is on its way.
Just taking a break to make a Christmas movie (had some ideas I loved that I had to do).

Poor

Bad nothing else i can say really just poor
And i thought the winchester Dilema was the worst I have been proved soo wrong

The Party rocked

Nice one timmy Good one for richards B day Can't wait for the Zombie and Loving the good old Marcus! Party was great I think Richard enjoyed another no plot story YaY Maybe We should make one for your b day we have plenty of time me and richard that is though it would probley suck it would be fun

Not the worst i have seen

The animation graphics wise was quite good but the sound the was nothing there really execpt a copied reteat over anoying track the idea was basic and bornig theres no backround and theres really nothing that makes it any good except graphics. But as i said i have seen worse

Worst animation

THis animation was poor and pathetic there is no imagination it is poor and frankly childish

WinchesterLock responds:

lol, so says the person with no flash to his name and having been around barely a month with next to no knowledge of the inner workings of Newgrounds, but I digress, I've see far far far far worse stuff on Newgrounds. The that you would say worst makes me question the validity of your comment. Plus, if you are going for something to criticise, how about making it constructive and tell me what to improve rather than a simple comment that does little to help me improve.

PS: I looked at your previous reviews and I see something notable: you list something else as "worst ever" so I hold your comment as having very little value.

Pretty great

THis one has just entered my 2nd spot the top being "Dare" both pretty moving animations i would like to see more animations i must say this would have taken you a very long time to do as its long

WOW... What to say except very moving!

#that was one of the most insiring animations i have everyseen and i must say that everyone should see it i am sending the link to all my friends to see and i think this one animation can change people and can change the world if people look inside and see what needs to be done and do it

There lots I can say I have done lots of jobs from Bar work to Publishing and some charity work. I was a media designer, working with sound, images, games and websites and now Im a student again studing graphic arts.

Ben Ward @carborundum

Age 34, Male

Student

Winchester School of Art

Joined on 4/30/06

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